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When Percy Met Audrey, Part 3

A/N: I've been writing much more of the ending of this story, and rather ignoring the middle, which is delaying posting a bit. Today I continued on from part 2, became a bit stuck again, then realized I had a 100 word drabble. So without further ado, part 3.



Parts 1 & 2

Percy had had a smile on his face all day. It was hard to believe one chaste kiss could make him this happy. Nothing at work bothered him; he just kept thinking that he would be having dinner with Audrey. When he saw his father in the hallway, he didn’t speed up or duck into the loo or hide or ignore him. He looked him in the eye and said, “Hello, Father.”

“Hello, Percy,” Arthur responded with surprise.

Percy continued walking down the corridor. It wasn’t much, but it was a start. Percy would be sure to tell Audrey tonight.

Part 4

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grandma_kate
Feb. 4th, 2009 03:49 am (UTC)
Actually, quite a respectable drabble. It shows how Percy is feeling. I bet Arthur will be sure to tell Molly tonight.

I am too wordy to write drabbles.
magikcat112
Feb. 11th, 2009 08:59 am (UTC)
This is SOOOO long overdue, and I apologize!

I like this little drabble -- it shows the effect Audrey already has over him. Can't wait for more!
mollywheezy
Feb. 11th, 2009 03:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! RL has been crazy, but I am hoping to have Part 4 up this week.
aggiebell90
Apr. 11th, 2009 02:09 am (UTC)
Heh. And already we're seeing a change in Percy, just after one meeting with Audrey. I'll just bet Arthur was surprised!

I can see Percy walking a little jauntily here, with a bounce in his step, as he continues on down the corridor, with Arthur watching him, totally confused by the turnaround. If I were an artist, I'd draw it (seriously, the picture is so clear in my head!), but alas, I have no talent in that field.
mollywheezy
Apr. 11th, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)
That's exactly how I pictured Percy! But I have absolutely no art talent either. ;)
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