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Title: Broken
Words: 100
Rated: PG
A/N: Written for hpgw100 prompt "broken".

Ginny clutched Harry’s hand and listened half-heartedly as various friends and family shared their memories of Fred. Nobody shared a story she hadn’t heard from the twins. She thought Fred would appreciate the funny stories. It was impossible to share memories of Fred and not laugh.

When it was George’s turn, he smiled, joked, and had everyone laughing hysterically. But Ginny was in the front row and saw his eyes. The twinkling light which always shone behind George’s eyes had gone out. He was broken, and Ginny didn’t know if George, or any of them, would ever be repaired again.

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drcjsnider
Oct. 13th, 2009 10:02 pm (UTC)
*sniff* I hate being reminded that Fred is dead... poor Weasley family...
mollywheezy
Oct. 14th, 2009 01:03 am (UTC)
I know. I hate that JKR killed off Fred. :(
drcjsnider
Oct. 14th, 2009 01:09 am (UTC)
Besides Ron... he was my favorite Weasley man...
grandma_kate
Oct. 14th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC)
You can pack a lot of emotion into a very few words. (takes hat off)
mollywheezy
Oct. 14th, 2009 01:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you!! :)
honourweasley12
Oct. 14th, 2009 03:26 am (UTC)
That was rather sad :(. Great writing, mollywheezy.
mollywheezy
Oct. 14th, 2009 01:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
fbo66
Oct. 14th, 2009 09:51 pm (UTC)
Oh, that was beautifully emotional. I really wish JKR hadn't killed Fred. It would have been so much nicer if the Weasley family remained unbroken.
mollywheezy
Oct. 15th, 2009 10:21 pm (UTC)
I agree. I hate that she killed Fred.
heart_eyes23
Jun. 21st, 2010 05:18 pm (UTC)
I like this depiction of George's despair. It rings very true.:)
mollywheezy
Jun. 21st, 2010 05:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
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